I understand the question, but what seems to be the problem?
I understand the question, but what seems to be the problem?
Painting \ Uncategorized | 04/23/07 @283 |
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I've been wanting to do an Asian 'femme fatale' type, with a qipao and gun ina noir-ish setting for a while now. earlier attempts just failed! i couldn't get anything right. This is my third try(and no i dont' want to show what the earlier ones look like<b>edit</b>: cropped the top a bit and enlarged the head as suggested...thanks!
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04/23/07 @286
Mert
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I think her head is a bit to small for her body and the neck to long.
Personally I would crop a bit on top..+8
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great character, cool style, cool colors, cool light
I like it
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04/23/07 @639
A beautiful lady killer.
Nice colors and expression!
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04/23/07 @707
Nice pose and mood
as mentioned I think her face is a tid bit too small
otherwise this is a nice work of art
+ 9
04/23/07 @715
Top marks!
Carlos
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update: cropped a bit and enlarged the head a bit as Rafsan, Wallce etc has suggested...thanks!
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Good job!
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Nearly everything's so well done ! I agree with JeffMD : excellent technique with this satin clothes. Good lighting too. However, I found a little problem with her right ankle and foot which are way too slim, IMO.
I would have not stained her legs with blood because it spoils her kinda dignity and coldness. And I think her gun is too big, you should have prefered a more 'feminine' gun.
+7/8 anyway
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yea the gun should be made more feminine, it would made a large effect on the picture
if i may add tips to make a character(female) more asian : when you do the eyes imagine looking into clear water with soothing feel, lips should not be too full or too sexy, and face bone structures are softer or less visible
narrow eyes helps alot too
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i finally finally finally got the chance to check your stuff out and its like OMG BOOM !!!
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just the gun looks a little bit lik not fitting to the rest with its dark outlines and and it`s colours
7/7
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Brian
The Lens Flare
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love the dress and the colours!
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This truely is a wonderful painting, I am honestly fighting for it to get an Fantasyana Art Award
However, good luck with the elite voting!!
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